Monday, December 7, 2009


It was still quite dark at six that morning, and there was frost on the windows when he came downstairs. He stirred the embers in the kitchen fireplace, crouching in his khaki greatcoat, and in minutes the fire was ablaze again; its light flickering on the low ceiling.

A thin blanket of snow had fallen during the night. In the yard outside, the old man filled the blackened kettle from the pump by the back door, and set it on the iron grid over the kitchen fire.

When he carried her tea upstairs on the Chinese lacquer tray his wife lay in just the same position on the pillows. Her face was gray and taut, and she gave him no sign of recognition.

He put the tray on the table and sat beside her on the bed, poured the tea, and took her hands, warming them.

"How d’you feel, then, Janet?"

She smiled. It was a detached, affectionate smile, but she said nothing.

She left the tea untouched and lay still, her eyes fixed on the patchwork quilt.

It was lighter now, but there was little to see in the room. The bed, a small night table and a narrow, painted closet. On the table was a colored photograph of an auburn-haired young woman. She stood in brilliant sunshine in front of a big, colonnaded gray stone building, dressed in a nurse’s uniform.

The old man made some comment about the cold, but Janet made no reply.

She’d never been like this before. He could tell she was fading, and inside him he knew she’d be gone before the day was over.

Without shaving on this December morning, he dressed in clothes he had worn yesterday and the day before. Down in the kitchen he took a writing pad and a stub of pencil from the drawer in the table and wrote a brief letter. The writing was clear, rounded and labored, and the words unlettered and elementary, but a blend of candor and affection compensated for whatever the note may have lacked in fluency. It assumed what was now inevitable, gave a compassionately untruthful reassurance that there had been no pain, and added that there was no need to come all the way home to Invercairn.

He folded the letter and slipped it into his pocket. It took more than thirty minutes to walk to the post office in the village. On his way through the beech wood he heard the sharp crack of shotguns, and voices calling through the trees.

He walked down the sweeping road to the wrought-iron gates at the entrance to the park. Beyond the gates, on the road to Invercairn, one or two cars passed, the sound of their wheels muffled by the snow.

Across the fields, between the road and the river, pheasants strutted, their tails rigid, and hares froze as he passed. At the water mill, icicles hung from the rotted woodwork of the wheel, like frozen stalactites.

It was warm in the post office, with the sweet smell of kerosene. Behind the counter, Lizzie McPhearson, post-mistress at Invercairn for more than forty years, was writing numbers in her ledger.

"Hamish Jackson. Look at you squinting, man. You've left your spectacles at home again!"

“Aye, I have too, Lizzie. I think I’ll forget my own head one day soon!”

He drew his own and his wife's pension money and, stooping to read his shopping list, bought a few small items: some tobacco, a new pencil, six envelopes, and an air-mail postage stamp.

"How's Janet, Hamish? Is she any better today?"

"No. She's sleeping. That's all she does now -- sleeps."

"Never you mind. Winter's nearly half-way gone. She'll soon be right as rain. And Ian Lawson's the best doctor in Aberdeenshire . . ."

The telephone rang, and Lizzie McPhearson was no longer with him.

Hamish filled the envelope, addressed, sealed and stamped it, and mailed it in the red pillar box outside.

Snow fell over the fields as he walked home. Not far from the edge of the village the big black Rolls Royce from the castle drove past, traveling in the same direction. He recognized McLeod, the chauffeur, who seemed not to notice him. As it passed, a small girl waved from the rear window.

When he reached the cottage Ian Lawson, the doctor, was waiting, his estate car parked in the yard outside the back door. A black Labrador dog crouched on the passenger seat, its nose pressed to the windscreen. It barked as the old man approached. The two men shook hands, even though they met every day.

"Hello, Hamish, how is she?"

"Nae so bad, doctor. She slept all night again. Hardly stirred. You've put something strong in them tablets."

"They'll give her some rest, and take the pain away. Shall we take a look at her?"

Hamish led the doctor up the short, steep staircase, and paused at the door, uncertain of what they might find in the cold room.

Janet was asleep. He touched her arm and she opened her eyes. Leaving her with the doctor he went down to the kitchen, putting on the kettle for the doctor to wash his hands.

Through the kitchen window he could see the shooting party from the castle leaving the wood -- four men, three women, some children, and a cluster of jumping dogs. Several loaders walked behind them, their guns under their arms, their barrels broken. Each carried a clutch of game birds.

The black iron door bell jangled in the kitchen on its coiled spiral. Then, at the door was a small boy, dressed in a blue Arran jersey, corduroys and boots.

"Hello, Master Alexander."

"Good morning, Jackson." The child's manner and self-assurance were more those of a grown man than a boy of eight.

The boy carried two cock pheasants, their limp necks tied together with coarse string.

"Grandfather says would you like a brace of pheasants? We shot them this morning."

Hamish thanked the boy, taking them.



"Grandfather says Mrs. Jackson’s dying. Is she really going to die?"

Hamish paused. "Aye, Alex. I do believe she is."

The boy did not reply. Hamish looked down at him. The child stepped back a few paces, his eyes fixed on the old man. Then he turned and ran back to the shooting party, who were by now half-way up the slope to the castle. He was calling them excitedly, but Hamish could not hear the words.

The doctor was upstairs for nearly an hour. When he came down he did not, as he usually did, reach for his coat from the hook on the door. Instead, he sat down by the fireplace.

Hamish waited by the window, still in his Army coat, his hands deep in the pockets.

"We've . . . we’ve done all we can, Hamish. You were at the hospital during the operation, and here for the past few weeks. You've seen it all. We've talked about it often, haven’t we? If she was younger there'd be some hope, but you're both in your eighties . . ."

"She's going to die today, isn’t she?"

"Well . . . yes, I think it’s likely, but --" He shook his head. "-- I can’t be certain."

The doctor rested both hands on the old man's shoulders.

"I'm sorry, Hamish, but there's little we can do now."

In the yard, the dog barked again as they appeared together. The wheels spun on the snow-covered ground, and in seconds the car was gone.

Throughout the afternoon Hamish sat by the kitchen fire. From time to time he made hesitant visits to the upstairs room. Each time she was in the same position with the same expression. Her breathing was barely audible. But there was a little warmth under the blankets.

It was dark shortly after four in the afternoon. He lit the lamp and put it on the kitchen table. There were no more callers from the castle. Outside the window half an inch of snow had settled on the sill.

At seven he went back to the room, but this time there was no breathing, and no warmth. Her eyes were closed, and one arm seemed to reach toward the door of the room.

For a moment he sat beside her on the bed holding her outstretched hand, which he had done so many times during the past months, to comfort them both.

He slipped under the covers, lying with one arm across her already cold body. After months of broken, watchful nights he slept until mid-morning; waking to see the garden under heavy snow, still falling.

* * *

Six days later, on Christmas Eve, radio station 3XY forecast 90 degrees. Dressed in her uniform, Sister Christie Jackson steeped out into the already hot Australian summer sun and unlocked her mail box in Glenhuntly Road, Melbourne.

There were three Christmas cards, a Telecom reminder and a letter postmarked Invercairn, Scotland.

Her father rarely wrote, but she always looked forward to his letter at Christmas, in time for Hogmanay, the Scottish New Year.

Standing on the sidewalk, waiting for a # 67 tram, she opened the envelope. On a sheet of yellow ruled notepaper, the writing was clear, rounded and labored.

But there was no letter; not the usual end-of-year family news. There was nothing in the envelope but a hastily-written shopping list, in pencil:

pension, stamp, envelops, tobaco, pencil.

Standing among strangers at the tram stop, Christie Jackson laughed aloud.

"Oh, Dad," she said. "You silly old fool! You forgot your spectacles again!"

Still laughing, she stepped down from the tram at Prince Henry's Hospital, screwed up the note, and tossed it into a nearby trash bin.


  1. John,

    This is a wonderful story: gentle, but with lovely, dark shadows, and full of lovingly-observed details and subtle explorations of place, character and time...and I was genuinely surprised by the ending.

    This is an extremely impressive short story worthy of any collection.

  2. Hi John,

    I enjoyed this so much! You create the perfect mood for this story. I look forward to reading more during my next study break.